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Your Nightmares Keep me Awake by ~blondesRsnart:iconblondesRsnart:



The small sounds you make
Let me know you’re awake,
When you lie there pretending to sleep.
You cry out at night,
Never give up the fight,
Your nightmares push you through.
Break off of the track,
And never head back,
To the slumber causing you stress.
Let go of my hand,
You’re crushing the band,
Of bones below my skin.
I see the sweat on your face,
I hear your heart race,
What could make you this afraid?
You’re always so strong,
To what thing do you belong,
When I’m no there to protect you.
You know I’ll not ask,
But you need to relax,
Yet still you continue to lose sleep.
We must get you some aid,
To help stop this charade,
Of this calmness you put me through.
©2005-2009 ~blondesRsnart
:iconblondesrsnart:

Author's Comments

Toss and turn all you like but eventually I'm going to start growing worried about you...

((this may end up as a double post... I tried to submit it earlier but it has yet to show up on my page... I'll delete one of them if that ends up being the case *nods* ))

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:iconevenangelsbleed:
Yet again... I'm amazed by your talent. The poem reminds me of sleeping with a sibling maybe? Having them toss and turn waking you up. And you can just tell their not having the best of dreams. A touching poem.

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Mirror mirror on the wall
watch her break and watch her fall
stitch her smile bruise her knees
walk among the enemies
:iconblondesrsnart:
*smiles* thanks... and actually this one was about a friend of mine... we took a trip and four of us were in one room. i shared a bed with my friend and she kept jerking in her sleep ><

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The bridge is burning and I still don't know which way I want to go.

WTF ART KIDS!
:iconevenangelsbleed:
Well that had to keep you awake... but same. You care for your friends as family. I guess

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Mirror mirror on the wall
watch her break and watch her fall
stitch her smile bruise her knees
walk among the enemies
:iconblondesrsnart:
*nods* yeah.. i guess i do

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The bridge is burning and I still don't know which way I want to go.

WTF ART KIDS!
:iconevenangelsbleed:
Well once again great poem! :trophy:

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Mirror mirror on the wall
watch her break and watch her fall
stitch her smile bruise her knees
walk among the enemies
:iconblondesrsnart:
lol thanks :cheers:

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The bridge is burning and I still don't know which way I want to go.

WTF ART KIDS!
:iconevenangelsbleed:
Anytime ^^

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Mirror mirror on the wall
watch her break and watch her fall
stitch her smile bruise her knees
walk among the enemies
:iconsilent-hillbilly:
great work...i just feel i can easily relate to many of your poems :)
:iconemanet-kaos:
Wooooo, my nytemares would keep you awake forsure...heh !! great writing again.
peace Emanet xx

--
" Nobody knows my troubles with God "

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